Comments on the Profile Drafts

With profile rough drafts, I tend to repeat the same comments. That's why I have a document like this one, which you possibly have looked at before, that walks through the issues I tend to see using student draft examples. There's something to be said, anyway, about learning to self-diagnose, so please use the linked file to examine what you have.

I've also put together this document, as an additional approach to working through those common issues. It's in the form of a checklist. 

Please know that I'm always more than happy to comment in-depth on revisions, the idea being that you've already gone in and attempted to develop and polish the piece on your own before asking for me to take another look. That's true for any of the projects. Just e-mail me or bring a hard copy in if you prefer handwritten feedback. If you e-mail me, simply ask me to look at your revised piece. I can go back in Drive and find it. 

Don't re-share it, unless you're going to add a message asking me to look at the revision. If you simply re-share, I won't know what you want—I'll merely get another e-mail telling me you've set up a share. I tend to delete those! Just communicate with me about what you need, that's all :)